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Miaubol
15th Mar 2016, 3:15 PM

So, there, 120 pages after its introduction... the secret of "the box" finally revealed...

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ChilPhil
15th Mar 2016, 3:25 PM

Whoa, didn't expect that. I've heard tales of dads telling their kids that a stork brought them, this delivery method is a lot more elaborate.

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Miaubol
16th Mar 2016, 12:22 PM

The more advanced the technologies, the more elaborate the solutions... and considering, spaceships do kindof look like birds ;P

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DizzasterJuice
15th Mar 2016, 4:00 PM

Oh wow, I was starting to worry that the box might turn out to be something like the movie "Se7en".
Brad Pitt: "What's in the box?!"

So Alph's from a different timeline from the future, but..umm..? Damn it my head's gonna explode!

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Miaubol
16th Mar 2016, 12:23 PM

Loved that scene. The bad news in the box, but also how it twisted the end of the story, in a way I really did not see coming xD

..and then, imagine what his heads feels like ;D

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Seabiscuit
15th Mar 2016, 6:56 PM

HOLY SHIT

Wow

This

Oh my god

Did not even slightly see this coming...! Amazing twist! Awesomely done!O:

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Miaubol
16th Mar 2016, 12:23 PM

Thanks :D

Ha ha poor Alph so didn't see this coming either. Anything but that. ..and worse is yet to come D:

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InfectedBlood
15th Mar 2016, 7:14 PM

This is an awesome twist! You're such a great storyteller! Thumbs up :D

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Miaubol
16th Mar 2016, 12:24 PM

..and this is just the beginning, the next page will.. Yeah, poor Alph. And thanks :D

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Stever
16th Mar 2016, 10:51 PM

Fantastic! Great to see this mystery revealed. :D

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Miaubol
16th Mar 2016, 11:06 PM

Haha yes, finally ..after a one and a half year real time ;D

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komikaze
17th Mar 2016, 3:11 AM

Please tell me I'm just adopted?

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Miaubol
17th Mar 2016, 9:12 PM

"Adopted" - Yes.
"Just" - No. ;P

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Stig Hemmer
18th Mar 2016, 2:49 AM

Time travel changes the time line, so the bad future is not inevitable.

That is good news.

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Miaubol
18th Mar 2016, 11:32 PM

Yes, no circular causality, there's a chance here. It may be just a small one though ;)

But as the original timeline was not deleted/overwritten, all those who did not travel back got pretty much stuck in that bad future ..

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AugustaCaesar
10th Dec 2016, 7:52 AM

I don't care how long ago this was posted...just had to say that this page absolutely blew my mind!

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Miaubol
12th Dec 2016, 8:08 PM

Hehehehe big reveal time, Alph's mind was pretty blown too ;D

(comments on older pages are totally fine :)) )

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Sovember
26th Jul 2017, 9:28 AM

Hahaha his reaction xD EPIC reveal, I didn't see this coming

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Miaubol
26th Jul 2017, 11:04 PM

He definitely didn't see that coming either :P

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AmeliaP
1st Oct 2017, 8:41 PM

His son another timeline? COOL! I like stories with psychic powers and time travel :D

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Miaubol
2nd Oct 2017, 7:05 PM

Cool :))

..but too bad Alph doesn't remember much from it, if anything at all ;)

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