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Miaubol
4th Jul 2017, 11:07 PM

Okay, "feed the gladiator to the lion"-scene finished, back to Alph & Co, the continuation of --> this.

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Seabiscuit
5th Jul 2017, 3:53 AM

Ah, finally a bit of happiness...:D

It's pretty impressive how they got all this together under such rather short notice, kinda.:D

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Miaubol
5th Jul 2017, 2:40 PM

Yes, we need those bits :D

The military unit and their hideout were already established, but yes, they had to act really fast to get the loyal ones there, and those in dire need of protection. Soldiers stationed on the surface, guards, the sphere followers, Alph..
the President........

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ChilPhil
5th Jul 2017, 2:57 PM

Great job with the first panel establishing the environment.

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Miaubol
5th Jul 2017, 3:11 PM

Thanks :D

Yes, that's indeed something I work on to improve. In the original layout that panel was much smaller, but then I decided to give it more space as well as detail. According to two independent critiques I recently got, I should pay more attention to such shots, for better providing the general overview as well as breathing space before jumping into the actual action.

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Greenwood Goat
5th Jul 2017, 3:13 PM

David: Wait... wait... everyone stop what they're doing and keep still... it's very faint, and I'm not sure it's even human, but it's aggressive and it's close... *points* that bag there. *approaches* Alph Colla Borsoi Weller, your laundry has attained sentience - of a limited sort - and is technically alive.

Everyone else: *stares at Alph, backs away*

David: *glances at fellow empaths, starts talking into radio*

Alph: I didn't leave it for THAT long! I think. Wait, when was the last Noontime Festival? And Jarlsson's birthday was... *counts on fingers* ...and the semester break before that...

Val Misevsky: Whatever, it's going straight into a military-grade washing machine for a full service wash and decontamination.

Alph: *runs out of fingers for the umpteenth time* *sags* Errrr... maybe I did neglect the laundry... a bit... a SERIOUS bit...

David: (to radio) Yes sir. (to Alph and Val) Negative on the laundry. We can't take the risk. We'll take it out into the middle of the cavern and burn it. Come on.

Alph: :-O ;_;

Laundry: aaaaaaaaaa! no! *tries to escape*

David: *!* Drop the bag, now! Everyone get back! Get those incendiaries ready, stat!

Laundry: *rages* noooooooooo! i want to live!!

>:=)>

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Miaubol
5th Jul 2017, 3:27 PM

Oh my gods! xDDDDD

Well, thinking about it..
It *does* sort of look like an Eldritch Abomination ;D

Yes, can't be too careful, better act fast, as long as it's still in its initial developmental stages-

Wait!

What if that creature was the key for defeating the villains? Sometimes allies are to be found in the most incredible and unexpected places.....

Okay, too late for that now. *looks at the smoldering heap which once was a living being and possibly Kordinar's last best hope for freedom and happiness D:

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AugustaCaesar
5th Jul 2017, 8:35 PM

Yeah, ha ha, not going to lie, but I was not expecting any happy tidings at either place: a pleasant surprise! ;)

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Miaubol
5th Jul 2017, 10:22 PM

Well, we just can't kill all hope entirely.. ;)

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DizzasterJuice
6th Jul 2017, 6:08 PM

The cave in the first panel is wonderfully drawn.

So if there were a traitor in their midsts you would think the empaths would sniff them out. Hopefully they're safe now.

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Miaubol
6th Jul 2017, 7:31 PM

Thanks :D

Yes, that's the idea they go by. Someone may have countermeasures though, tricks how to hide traitorous mind patterns, but there's also counter-countermeasures, a especially powerful empath can notice such tricks. David is such a powerful one, so there is hope...

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jackbauer
8th Jul 2017, 2:20 AM

Every panel on this page looks great! Nice work!! :)

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Miaubol
8th Jul 2017, 9:28 AM

Thanks :D
Yes, those took a while to do :))

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demontales
2nd Aug 2017, 2:23 AM

How sweet :)

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Miaubol
2nd Aug 2017, 7:48 PM

Yay friends! :))

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AmeliaP
23rd Oct 2017, 12:24 AM

A new character has entered :)

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Miaubol
23rd Oct 2017, 9:27 PM

Oh yes, we'll definitely see more of this guy :D

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