Summary #1 - Part II
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Miaubol
18th Jul 2018, 2:18 AM

Summary of #1, second part.

And yes, bonus pages! They'll be posted later this year, another flashback with the time traveler back then, how he'll do on Groolar, after he made off from Kordinar.

Some of the text is hidden for now, because - spoilers. I'll edit this summary to show all text eventually.



Edit (05.05.2019):
Text no longer hidden, the seven bonus pages put where they belong in #1.

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asmanel
18th Jul 2018, 4:52 AM

Remaining question : Can a prediction of the future make the time fork ?

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Miaubol
21st Jul 2018, 5:31 PM

That's a really cool question. In *theory* the answer would be yes: *If* the actual future is predicted, as in the inescapable future, we'd either have a time line loop and circular causality (which is a no-go), a fork: the 'old timeline' where the psychic was not able to predict the future, and the new timeline where the psychic predicts the future in the old timeline, and thus makes it changeable in the new timeline. The only difference from actual physical time travel is that only information travels backwards in time.

But the predictions done here are not like that, they just show a potential future, things which may possibly happen, perhaps would have happened if they were not predicted, perhaps still happening even though predicted. No time line forks are created, no information is actually traveling backwards in time, all what the psychic senses is based on current situations and how they may most likely develop.

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Sovember
18th Jul 2018, 5:06 AM

Pete nooo!! Man I remember all this like it was yesterday! Great times, I remember the ever colorful Isty xD

Oh man that's a great idea with the spoiler bar! Now i'm super intrigued, like an unlockable in a video game LOL

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Miaubol
21st Jul 2018, 5:32 PM

'Nooo' indeed. And never to be forgotten. Poor poor Pete, and poor Alph D:

Oh yes, Isty... poor Alph again ;)

The spoiler bars weren't there originally, but then I realized the summary would just ruin a lot of the fun actually reading those flashback pages when they'll be up.

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Amalockh1
18th Jul 2018, 5:11 AM

I know I have said this before, but I love the expressions you give to your characters in this comic, Miaubol! They are simply amazing.

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Miaubol
21st Jul 2018, 5:32 PM

Thanks a lot :D
Yes, expressions is one thing I really want to get right, so I'm really happy to hear it works out :))

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dubiz senju
18th Jul 2018, 9:16 AM

Another great summary page! I remember that party and Pete's death

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Miaubol
21st Jul 2018, 5:33 PM

Thanks :))
Yes, judging from the comments on the death page, that scene got pretty ..memorable. I'm happy it worked out so well, I've seen that character death scenes often get a lot of negative criticism, such as unnecessary and 'just to be edgy'.

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Dera Nuel
22nd Jul 2018, 7:27 PM

I feel bad that Pete died but stuff like that are necessary from time to time depending on the type of comic.

Kodinar25000 is about destruction of worlds, planet politics, civil wars... So I wasn't expecting it to be all smooth sailing and merry making.
I think you're doing a great job!

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Miaubol
25th Jul 2018, 12:38 AM

Wow thanks :D

Yes, in the very end that's how stories work, bad things must happen ;) and you're right, what kind of bad things depends on the kind of story, in this one there are the very bad things.

A lot of the negative criticism is probably when the character death is dealt with pretty poorly.

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ChilPhil
18th Jul 2018, 3:58 PM

Oh boy we get to experience Alph's hangover again.

Oh, poor old Petey.

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Miaubol
21st Jul 2018, 5:35 PM

The very worst day in Alph's life, the hangover just the very beginning. Poor old Petey indeed.

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DizzasterJuice
18th Jul 2018, 4:04 PM

Maybe they should've fried Isty's armpit hair instead of Pete's brain. They wouldn't get any information from it but we would all be better off in the end.

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Miaubol
21st Jul 2018, 5:35 PM

Oh dear xD
I guess I exaggerated it somewhat in this summary, it didn't use to be *that* much o.O

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DizzasterJuice
21st Jul 2018, 8:35 PM

No it's perfect as is. It really defines her character. :D

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Miaubol
25th Jul 2018, 12:34 AM

"defines her character"-
He he well I guess I can only agree here ;D

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Seabiscuit
19th Jul 2018, 10:12 PM

OHHH. So mysterious.

Aw gosh, poor Pete, all over again! At least he's looking less like a mummy raisin, bwahhahaa.:D

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Miaubol
21st Jul 2018, 5:36 PM

He he 'mysterious' describes it pretty well. Originally it was just in order to avoid spoilers, but then I noticed it also works as teasers :))

The "mummy raisin" is reserved for those who read the actual pages ;)

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InfectedBlood
21st Jul 2018, 12:08 AM

My crush on Kobolt is so embarrassing :D

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Miaubol
21st Jul 2018, 5:36 PM

Well, you'd have a good time on Kordinar ..or, at least, be safe there ;)

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InfectedBlood
21st Jul 2018, 6:44 PM

Yes, unless she decides she doesn't like me and chops my head off o_O

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Miaubol
25th Jul 2018, 12:34 AM

hmmm maybe better not join the resistance group or steal her ship ;)

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AugustaCaesar
21st Jul 2018, 7:13 AM

I honestly laughed at Alph's and Pete's faces! XD

What kind of Kordinarian party would that be, if neither chaos nor romance ensued? ;)

I bet I can guess the spoilers! heh

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Miaubol
21st Jul 2018, 5:38 PM

Oh yes, at good parties chaos or romance tends to happen ;D
*remembers the wild times where the police was a pretty common ingredient too o.O

The spoilers may be sort of guessable, there have been some hints here and there what happened ;)

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AmeliaP
25th Jul 2018, 2:00 AM

Bonus pages? Weeeeeeeee! Can't wait!

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Miaubol
29th Jul 2018, 1:14 AM

:))

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