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Miaubol
23rd Jun 2015, 6:23 PM

R.I.P. Pete

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Also, I had to do some retconning on years - The originally years 24885 (Time gate is activated) and 24995 (Pete looks into the future and dies) are now changed to 24878 and 24985 respectively. The "doomsday" year 25000 is in less than 1200 days, instead of less than 400 days. For in-story reasons not revealed yet, I figured it makes way more sense. Days and seasons however stay all the same.

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Stever
23rd Jun 2015, 6:53 PM

Sometimes vengeance is just enough to keep you going.

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Miaubol
24th Jun 2015, 11:58 AM

Somebody needs their ass kicked! ;)

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Seabiscuit
23rd Jun 2015, 7:04 PM

Awww man so sad.:C
Alph sure is determined...That's good at least!

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Miaubol
24th Jun 2015, 11:59 AM

Yeah, no way he's giving up just like that!

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ChilPhil
23rd Jun 2015, 8:25 PM

Oh how sad.

The little up and down symbols on the tombstone are a nice creative touch.

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Miaubol
24th Jun 2015, 12:00 PM

A Kordinar tombstone standard, popular among those not affiliated to any specific religion.

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Call Me Tom
23rd Jun 2015, 9:08 PM

I realy like your building designs in the opening shot!

Wow Alph's starting to go all badass!

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Miaubol
24th Jun 2015, 12:01 PM

Thanks. Typical Kordinar architecture, many straight lines, but not really uniformity.

Yeah, he's pretty angry seriously pissed off now.

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hankinstein
23rd Jun 2015, 9:12 PM

That's the spirit!

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Miaubol
24th Jun 2015, 12:02 PM

Oh yes, he's not stopped that easily!

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randomNPC
26th Jun 2015, 5:04 AM

Yes! Avenge him!

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Miaubol
26th Jun 2015, 12:17 PM

REVENGE!!!

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InfectedBlood
27th Jun 2015, 12:26 AM

Fight!!!

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Miaubol
27th Jun 2015, 12:28 AM

Oh yes, he will!

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Zimriel
30th Dec 2015, 7:25 AM

'DUSK SEASON'

No... *wabbit* season.

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Miaubol
30th Dec 2015, 7:42 PM

Mr Fudd better stay away from the cemetery though.. xD

on Kordinar, because of the planet's slow rotation, a day lasts around 11 weeks, so dusk is like an entire season instead of just dusk.

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AmeliaP
10th Sep 2017, 9:29 PM

I was going to question if Pete had 107 years, but I read your notes before

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Miaubol
19th Sep 2017, 7:02 PM

Old Pete was not so old after all D:

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AmeliaP
19th Sep 2017, 10:41 PM

mwahahaha! Yeah! XD

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TheVoidchildProject
4th Feb 2019, 10:47 AM

I wanna make a case for, sour as it may be, that Alph's father is kinda responsible for all this. He might not have had bad intentions, but still, he did push everyone's luck.

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Miaubol
11th Feb 2019, 2:06 AM

He did. It's understandable why he did so, and how he got too desperate, but yes, he should have realized that something was about to go terribly wrong before he got that "Grid 2" activated.

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